Allatallahbel In Clear Waters On A Still Night

September 23, 2017 at 7:52 pm (Geopolitics and International Relations, Horror, International Intrigue, Mystery/horror, News, The Supernatural, Vampire novel) (, )

Allatallahbel In Clear Waters On A Still Night

Allatallahbel the Vampiress Priestess of Baal lay back in the clear waters of the lake.

The night sky 🌌 above her reflected in the waters as she lay.

Allatallahbel wore a bright gold evening dress that shone like the noon day sun.

Below her feet was the reflection of the moon.

The planet Jupiter seemed to reflect just above her belly.

Above her head shone the planets Venus, Mars and Mercury as well as the 9 stars of the constellation Leo reflecting in the waters.

The constellation Virgo reflected on the tranquil waters of the entire lake itself in which Allatallahbel lay.

Suddenly a water snake 🐍 swam out from under her dress giving the impression that she had just given birth to it.

At that very moment the lid of the sarcophagus of Alexander the Great opened in the great Macedonian conquerer’s undiscovered tomb.

Also at that very moment, a huge storm arose on the Sea of Galilee.

And no Nazarene carpenter’s son around to still it.

-A vampire novel chapter
written by Christopher
Saturday September 23rd


  1. Adnama72Blog said,

    I Love it.

  2. Hyperion said,

    Good one, Chris. Lots of visuals conjured up. The snake under the skirt was the koop duh grass. Gave me the willies πŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌπŸ‘πŸΌ

    • Dracul Van Helsing said,

      Thanks very much, Daniel. πŸ™‚

      Yes, as I was telling my room mate last night that most of the vampire novel chapters I write are quite humourous (which is why I call my books vampire novels rather than horror novels).

      I said that occasionally though I’ll write a vampire novel chapter in the form of a good horror short story in the style of Stephen King, H.P. Lovecraft or Edgar Allan Poe.

      And I was telling him last night that the vampire novel chapter that I had written earlier in the evening was very much in the mode of the classic macabre horror genre.

      Glad it scared the willies out of you.😧

      I succeeded in what I set out to do. πŸ™‚

      • Hyperion said,

        The only time I ever suspected a snake under a skirt was when I saw Kaitlyn Jenner with Oh Bummer at the WH. It appeared Caitlyn’s dress made quite an impression on Lady Oh Bummer. Perhaps the serpent peeked out from under the hem at her and winked.

      • Dracul Van Helsing said,

        If Mae West had been First Lady (with W. C. Fields as President), she’d have said to Caitlyn Jenner, “Is that a snake under your skirt or are you just glad to see me?”.

      • Hyperion said,

        Waaaa haaaa haaaa! Mae West would have been a great First Lady. Caitlyn would make a great Secretary of Offense. We could send her to NK to discipline Baby Kim with that snake.

      • Dracul Van Helsing said,

        And North Korean Foreign Minister Ri Yong Ho would whine and snivel that such an action amounts to a Declaration of War. πŸ˜€

      • Hyperion said,

        Knowing Baby Kim, he would declare it an act of love and all hostilities would cease leaving the Twitter in Chief fuming that he missed out on firing BK and banishing him to live as tiny dust particles sprinkled across the land.

      • Dracul Van Helsing said,

        oh, that’s right, I had forgotten that Dennis Rodman (a basketball player prone to wearing dresses himself) is friends with Kim Jong-un.

        I guess Kim does tend to swim in that direction.

        He’d fit right in with the Hollywood crowd these days.

      • Hyperion said,

        DARPA Dark Ops has a plan to send Dennis Rodman Cybrids with exploding farts to Rocket Boy. At the state welcome dinner the Cybrids will outgas in a honking melody reminiscent of the famous Korean folk song, Arrirang. The maloderous melody will be triggered when Rocket Boy lights his oversized Cuban cigar made in China and properly prepared by the Caitlyn Jenner Cybrid in a Clintonesque way. Problem solved.

      • Dracul Van Helsing said,

        While DARPA Dark Ops spends billions of taxpayer dollars on these fancy gadgets to assassinate Kim (think of all the fun that CONTROL Agent #86 Maxwell Smart would have with DARPA toys), MI-6 is just planning to poison the next take out order Kim orders from his favourite Chinese food home delivery restaurant in Pyongyang- thus preventing the rise of another Margaret Thatcher in Britain who’ll drastically cut, burn and slash government programs for having spent and wasted too much money πŸ’°.

      • Hyperion said,

        Yes, this is how government works and coordinates with allies. Nice summary. πŸ‘πŸΌ

      • Dracul Van Helsing said,

        ROTFL πŸ˜‚!

  3. doesitevenmatter3 said,

    Great vivid word-pics!
    As I read the ending, I heard ominous music in my head!
    HUGS!!! πŸ™‚

    • Dracul Van Helsing said,

      Thanks, Carolyn. πŸ™‚

      I’m glad my horror story genre vampire novel chapter produced ominous music in your mind once you reached my scary ending. :0

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